Friday, March 11, 2016

In Love With Love Comments

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She drew a picture of a heart to symbolize their love
He took her heart and smeared her blood across the page
She took the page and folded it into a paper flower
He took the flower and tore it up, discarded in the trash
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Laura Marie Clark
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Dr Antony Theodore 11 March 2016

She took the trash and rummaged through in search of some faint hope He took her hope and crushed it to end her tender dreams break up, breaking up, love, poem, poems, relationship, relationships, writing i found it a terrible poem depicting it so in your imagination. but it conveys a lot...... in love with love. the title itself conveys a lot and you are a philosopher. thank you. tony

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Poetry Falcon 11 March 2016

He took her hope and crushed it to end her tender dreams... love it!

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