Whisper Dawn

Rookie - 0 Points (July / South Dakota)

Inside - Poem by Whisper Dawn

Look out with my eyes
feeling the wind blowing thru me inside
Warmth of the sun on my skin
feels like ice from within
Hoping all this will past
soon I hope and it will be the last
The waiting takes the most time
with each minute that goes by
my heart aches deeper inside
Some say take it slow, give it time
I just wish I could close my eyes.
Wake up to a new life start
Yes, I know our love is gone
But its me who's left
with the memories of our heart!


Comments about Inside by Whisper Dawn

  • (6/22/2008 10:14:00 PM)


    thats how i feel
    it was good
    if you want you can read a few of mine
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 22, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 24, 2008


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