Naveen Choudary

Rookie (14 November 1982 / Chandigarh)

It Strikes Like A Knife! - Poem by Naveen Choudary

Like a desert burning
live, a dropp of water

You made a stasis, turning
Love assured no flatter,
set that love flame burning

Like a sea of water
still leaves thirst

Your eyes, shows better
I be always, always be yours first

Like a life earth, with air
Without its juss moon, abiss dead gloom

Love, life moves in gears
without,
a dead gloom,
a dark sere adds to your fears

Been consumed by lonelisness
Your love's emanation,
to fill my life hollow emptiness

Noone would have beared A rock
Your love moved a stranded boat
Now a turbulent ready to be cruise
Forgetting the lifes cruel bruise

Your face shines a like moon
Brightness reflecting my life's blooms

You're here, my life blossom with cheers
Don't go, fears arrives cheers nomore

My stranded life perpetuates with you
Thats why you only you
STRIKES THRU


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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 8, 2005

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 15, 2010


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