Saturday, August 26, 2023

Ivory Of Charoite Ballad Comments

Rating: 5.0

Do you still wish and pray for a happy ending?
To see is to believe, but my hope is descending.
Wanting to write my own phenomenal fairytale,
And finding my steadfast knight, but it is a fail.
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Enchanting Owl
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Julrick Verallo 28 August 2023

this ballad is a rollercoaster, thanks for this

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S S 28 August 2023

'Seeing you is torture; looking at me is torment.' this is so witty and powerful, what a poet.

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S December 28 August 2023

after i read the poem, i make sure to read the notes from the poet and it helped understand more the emotion of the poem. love it

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Acir Eryat 28 August 2023

what a brilliant mind, thanks for this...

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CJ DG 28 August 2023

'My tears are a sharp sword; my cry is a rusted crown.' this line hits me! 5/5

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M H 28 August 2023

what a great and beautiful ballad!

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