Jasmin Comments

I rate this poem a 3/5 bruhs +1 bruh This poem sadly did not have the bruh momentum that I am chad had. This is still a good poem, but I believe the bruh momentum needs to be brought back, because that will truly turn this into a master piece among bruh. I would also like to add that the addition on neurotoxin as a rhyme. This is a nice addition and I find it disrespectful when poets don't include the word. This has added an extra bruh making this a 4/5 bruh score.

The level of this philosophical poem is impeccable