Jealousy Poem by TaylorMarie Rdz.

Jealousy



This is what you do to me u try and make me cry
and i just try to cover it up with a bunch of lies.
you know all this glow is special effects
and my world is black and white without you
and u don't know what i've been through.
i just act happy to please others when all i really want is you.
you seem like the one but u just don't get it
you know i love you but u run away from it
and you know you love me too
but your just too immature
to notice that i really really love you
and even though i have guy friends
you shouldn't be jealous cause
nothing can compare to you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Taylor-marie Rdz. 16 June 2010

yea they really dont understand and its very fustrating and thanx for the tip =D im trying to work on not saying 2 much of the same word but its just how i talk even though its not very helpfull when writing poems

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Kayla B Mitchell 11 June 2010

i like the poem (i agree girl) they dont understand , but try not to use a lot of and's

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