Wednesday, May 7, 2014

Justice Burns Comments

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I rise to watch man at his life,
It sickens me to see such petty strife!
'Why watch if you hate it so? ' they say,
Because it is rare to see one soul actually pray!
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Jaden Oliver
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Adeline Foster 19 May 2014

Now that was a well thought poem and I hope to read many more of yours. Read mine - Of Dandelions and Tears - Adeline

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