Thursday, December 17, 2009

Knife Attack Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don’t bother stabbing me in the back
Its too numb to feel you knife attack
Stab me square in the front
It doesn’t matter if your knife is blunt
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Bethaney Walters
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7he N0153 4nd 7he Fur9 07 January 2010

Brutal and beautiful, go on lass! ! ! I love to hear such a strong character in such a young woman. Well penned/typed, you should be proud Bethaney keep up the great writing you have a talent! !

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Patrice Dixon 17 December 2009

This poem is absolutely beautiful and epitomises a strong woman who has been through it all and can face anything thats thrown at them. So no need to 'stab her in her back' because you wont be affected, your too strong to be taken down. I love the imagery once again. Beautiful poem! XxX Keep it up! Look forward to reading some more!

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