Lay Scattered On The Ground Comments
The sun was shining in the clear blue sky
The moon was high in the darkened night sky
The snow fell gently to the earth
As the wind whipped up the leaves
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Really very beautiful. The first collaboration I've seen on this site.
A lovely collaboration once again, the trio works well and beautiful words grace the page.'the wind whipped up the leaves', 'Lay scattered on the ground', 'the leaves whisper their hush', -- beautiful, I love it all, very nice my poet friends. A well deserved (10) . Melvina
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12/8/2025 5:36:41 AM # 1.0.0
'But the leaves whisper their hush' is just beautiful, beautiful. And the whole poem sad and evocatively penned. At first I wondered who wrote which line, and then I said to myself - what does it matter? The finished product is quite delightful. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥