Leaving Camustianavaig Poem by John Beaton

Leaving Camustianavaig



(from Portree Cemetary)

Today we leave the croft and you
and, though the rain-mist makes it vague,
we see your chosen gravesite view
ploughing the clouds—Ben Tianavaig.

We see its bracken patches spring
by dykes you built, where bogs of peat
lie spaded out for winter heat,
how sheep paths terrace slopes of ling,

and how the freshet gravitates
to where, as tykes, you fished the burns
and played by byres and butter-churns,
on Sundays ate from heirloom plates.

You left us that bespoken land
but cloud has claimed the graveyard's view—
the mighty plough is buried and
your offspring leave the croft to you.

Friday, January 31, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: departure,home,nostalgia,parents,places,scotland
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My father was raised on a croft on the Isle of Skye. Crofts are small rented farms but they have a system of tenure that links generations: the family retains the croft as long as one member works it. Otherwise it reverts to another tenant. Although our family were all deeply attached to that place, when my father's generation died none of us could take up the subsistence lifestyle. This poem came to me in the graveyard where he, my mother, and several other relatives are buried. It has been published in the fine British magazine "Northwards Now."
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