Thursday, December 11, 2025

Let It Pour Down, Torrential Rain Comments

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The rain has fallen today,
washing away the ice of bygone days.
The roof gleams bright, the tulip garden has turned sacred-serene.
Feeling at peace, at peace, I breathe in the air deep.
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Koffi B Sossou 11 December 2025

Peace and serenity in nature and in our societies, all we hope for.

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Tamiz Ludi 18 December 2025

Thank you

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Koffi B Sossou 11 December 2025

What a wonderful poem! I like the way you use the rain as a symbol of purification, renewal and hope for a better, more peaceful society. I wish this rain could really wash the 'ice of bygone days'!

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Tamiz Ludi 18 December 2025

Thanks a lot

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