Isn’t it feel so nice
When suitor is all around you
They adore you
Admire you
Make you feel so wanted
Make you feel so cared
For them, you’re like a princess
So while they were around
Make yourself like a butterfly
Fly as much as you wanted
Let them chase your beauty
Make them please as they can do
Because when they’ve caught you
Things will never be the same
When you fall into their hands
You’ll be the one who’ll adore them
Admire them
Make them feel wanted
Make them feel cared
And if they were not pleased
DUMPING you is all they can do…
26.07.06
Your narration is impeccable. You have dealt beautifully on a complex subject - relationship. I like the way you carried the theme to the end.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Ah, your choice of words has me baffled. I love the 'butterfly' in poems, yet i've never been able to get that analogy quite right. I really like this one, and the truth of it is so prevelant. You're so wanted then you find the one you want... and what happens? Murphy's law. They dump you. Ah this poem was refreshing in a way. Love it. Gabriela