Saturday, April 13, 2013

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Like free birds in the sky
we were never meant to live that life
like a promise wished away by a lie
we were meant to let memories die
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Vicki May 21 May 2013

a beautiful poem. The last two lines were very touching

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Vicki May 21 May 2013

a beautiful poem. The last two lines were very touching

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Vicki May 21 May 2013

a beautiful poem. The last two lines were poignent

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Gajanan Mishra 13 April 2013

very fine and heart touching, we were always meant to say bye. good write. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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