Why did this happen to me?
It was such unlucky fate.
That I was put in that position,
When I said, “I want to wait.”
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Awesome. I've missed hearing about your stories and poems. I loved the poem,
Emily- I like this poem - but the story is frightening! I'm sorry if it's true. I have found that revenge fantasy can be quite fulfilling. If it is the case that someone ought to end up in front of a judge for this (and it sounds like they do) , then that is always the best thing. Good writing and good luck. :) -Jim.
'My tears have formed a river' is the part I love the most. Such a nice metaphor. You are so great at writing poetry, continue on. All the best.