Thursday, January 12, 2012

Life Alone Comments

Rating: 5.0

Time passes hoping for a helper,
a mire of rejection recieved in his shelter.
Journey alone, training to be brave,
to face a group of soldiers who are coming like a wave.
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Malaika Rebello 21 February 2012

Thankyou so much for your compliments as i will surely treasure these comments and keeping in mind when i write my next poem.And continue commenting.

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Saadat Tahir 10 February 2012

Sadly for the milling millions plodding all over mother earth's bosom there is no messiah and no respite as we look all around there is so much pain and suffering.... mostly we are just…..sacrifices at the alter of bloated egos in the maniac temples of self aggrandizement. great lines...very well written.... loved it :)

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Areeba Sohail 28 January 2012

wowwwwwwwwwwwww another great piece of writing! wini was going on praising ur work on the phone to me! its wonderful keep writing more! ! ! honour of talking to u ! ! great great great! ! ! ! !

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Wini Jose 27 January 2012

hey its me again can you please tell me how you write so well. i admire your work. you write poems of such indepth meaning at such a tender age. great

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Clarence Rebello 15 January 2012

Excellent -Life is a bubble -enjoy it before it burst

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Khurram Siddique 15 January 2012

Reflecting the past memories and there is hope for the future. Good Luck! ! ! !

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