Tuesday, January 8, 2008

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Dreams, Desires and Destinies
scramble through a door,
Fights, Spats, Curse
make up the aura,
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Kalky Inkler
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Glancy A 20 April 2008

Excellent! Very visual and immediately throws the reader into the picture frame of the poem. Very very good. the style of the poem is also excellent esp with the breaking of the two words...very action packed and real! Good work here. good figures of speech.

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