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Well i really like the way you presented it. As Afzal said, you have so much potential in you..just don't ever stop writing. Thanks for sharing :)

Well i really like the way you presented it. As Afzal said, you have so much potential in you..just don't ever stop writing. Thanks for sharing :)

The way I feel It's all so real Where I am What I do You don't like it too bad I have the right to be happy or sad I just have the will and the strenghth It's not my choice to be here everyday But I do have the choice to live. its best of your whole poems... keep writing on..because you have much ability to write good poetry..the idea dna the you did this piece of poem is fantastic and impressive enough..well done dear poet...10/10