Tuesday, September 14, 2010

Loneliness Comments

Rating: 2.7

Loneliness a sorrow so deep it crushes all hope and happiness.
The cold blade that cuts the light.

It leads to depression, a depression we cannot escape.
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Christina Bruce
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Bert Bell 08 November 2010

This is a very powerful poem and I was quite moved by it’s poignancy. It started very sadly, evoking strong, sad emotions and then you’ve ended it beautifully on a positive not. It’s very well done. Nice use of metaphor, as well. 10

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