Look Inside Poem by loves crushed

Look Inside



people look into there broken heart,
wishing,
wanting,
a brand new start,
they look into there memories,
and guess what all they see,
they see them,
them and there true love to be.

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Sylvia Lukeman 10 February 2012

A beautiful poem.I get the feeling tnat you enjoy writing poetry .............................................................................................................. The spelling of the word there means over there You need the possessive word their. (I hope that you do not mind me writing this

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