Wednesday, December 12, 2012

Losing My Grip Comments

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I've never fallen but I'm constantly slipping
I've seen this all before but I erased the taping
I'm tired of the fighting but I'm the one striking
Tired of telling the story, that's why I'm writing
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Christian Semmler
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Theresa Short 12 December 2012

I like this poem. Really good rhyme, and rhythm. Good job. :)

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