Lost Poem by Stephanie J. Rivers

Lost

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As I sit here wondering what to do
I am reminded about the times I spent with you
You were always there to listen to me
But now you're gone and I have no one to talk to
I don't know what my direction is anymore
You were my guidance, my one solid port
Now, it's my turn to be the Guide
I don't know how to do this because I can't even guide myself
They are sucking my life away and all I want is to stay
But I feel I'm being pulled away
The person that I used to be isn't here anymore
She was a strong individual who knew how to think
and how to get things done
Now I have no thoughts and no clear process
It's all been taken away by everyone
I try to talk to you but I can't hear you
I just want to hear you
I just want to hear you
Just one more time
Talk to me and help me
Find my way back to me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stef Rivers 25 July 2008

Excellent writing again! Remarkable use of description of feelings. Please continue to share. Thank you.

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Donny Pascal 21 July 2008

O MY GOD...this poem is awesome...this has to be one of the best poems i read...the message you sent out was clear and touching...this poem is engraved in my heart...you are a hero for writing this and going through this situation

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Stephanie J. Rivers

Stephanie J. Rivers

Boston, Massachusetts
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