Thursday, December 17, 2009

Lost At Sea Comments

Rating: 5.0

I push I pull I and try to find
The answers that will free and ease my mind

I know what I know and think what I think
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Patrice Dixon
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 19 December 2009

Using sea as a metaphor this is really a unique poem. You have a wonderful poetic sensitivity, Patrice. Keep writing. Best Wishes. Naseer

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