Lost Time. Poem by dana mariee

Lost Time.



Lost time is never found,
The broken pieces on the ground,
They shatter your pulse one last time,
Baby; embrace the end of the line,
Cause no matter what happens next,
Remember life is just a test,
So overcome the obstacles,
Your fears and the impossible,
Love isn’t just a hallow word but we can’t find the meaning,
Try and try again; you’ll always end up bleeding,
That’s what they tell you from the start,
Because they believe it will tear you apart,
To think of it night after night,
Becomes such a personal fight,
Time suffocates you as it reminds you again,
Every second ticking brings you closer to the end,
The light swallows your escape and you slowly black out,
Your scream is hanging in the air now; I will never back down.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Javier Falcon 28 July 2010

It's a great idea to write about, but when rhyming try to find smoother words... To show the feelings of what you are saying: D Great piece.

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Lucy L 05 July 2010

There is both the idea of hope and hopelessness in this poem, I like the mixture of the two and I often feel this way too! Great poem :)

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