Wednesday, June 10, 2009

Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm in this box and It's filled with red stuff.
I'm bleeding my heart out for you. It's not to long before I'm gone and I'll be waiting for you forever.

But why do I love you? I have no idea.Without you in my life I die.
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Crystal Michalski
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Marieta Maglas 10 June 2009

ideas all hopeless.... all through the stanzas.......to move into the unknown....deep to ponder on....the message enclosed all through is soul awakening..nice poem..10++

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Jones Jones 10 June 2009

Ah Crystal; Its good to get your feelings out and onto paper so to speak... You have in this prose, adequately expressed your feelings for this person who has betrayed you and whom you still love even though they have hurt you so badly...

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Crystal Michalski

Crystal Michalski

Rogers, Arkansas
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