Sunday, September 26, 2010

Love Comments

Rating: 4.0

It's this feeling in my chest
That can't make me feel depressed
Makes me wanna hold you
Yes baby it's true
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Phil Kellogg
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Keyaki Zelkova 26 September 2010

I like this poem: colloquial and natural. Also couplets are made effectively.

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