Love 3 Poem by caz ……

Love 3



Im sitting in the schools bathroom,
With a razor in my hand,
Blood flowing down my arms,
Seeking one demand.

I wanted my life to be taken,
To be done and say good bye,
Although you never saw me,
You will always here my cry.

His new precious girlfriend,
Sees me hanging from the stall,
She sees my wrists cut open,
And blood all over the wall.

On the wall written in blood said,
I love you and you knew it from the start,
Did you even care,
When you ripped me apart?

His girl friend screamed real loud,
And then he ran inside,
He saw my cold body,
And then began to cry.

Oh how could you do this,
Leave me here this way,
I love you too dont leave,
Is all he had to say.

He came to me and hugged me,
And he must have heard my cry,
Because he whispered slowly,
I love you please dont die.

He found my bloody razor,
And said he could not resist,
He slit his throat and bled with me,
And for the first time, we kissed.

I love you we said to each other,
This moment we shall cherish,
Together we had lived,
And together we shall perish!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brett Wood 21 December 2008

Caz I'm new to reading poems and trying to learn to write myself so what I think is in this poem I could envision somehow and see through another's eyes, something that I could at this point never grasp first hand. I learned something about poetry thanks It can be quite dark cant it.

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