Love And Sin Comments

Thank you very much for your comments I made this up today after overhearing my friends talking about people in a very black and white manna so I wrote this to capture two points of view (none of which are my own hehe) . I don't really see right and wrong good and evil moral and immoral such titles I believe are human constructs. For me I see choice and consequence little more. PS: weak starved is what I meant thanks nice catch ill go edit. PSS: this is my 2ed poem ever made hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed wrighting it :)

Nice surprise ending after the strong contrast of sin and purity earlier in the poem. 'week starved'? 'weak starved' isn't that what you meant? NIce contrast also of short direct lines with long, descriptive lines. I like short poems like this one, with one basic idea or theme. Personally, I tend to see purity and sin, or good and evil, in gray tones, not black and white.