Thursday, February 9, 2012

Manipulation Comments

Rating: 5.0

She hears a sound in the darkest part of the house.
Her pulse quickens.
It is nothing, she tells herself-but is it really?
Why does she get up to inspect the possible intruder in the most cliche way?
...
Read full text

Gabrielle Franchetti
COMMENTS
Kiki Lafleur 13 February 2012

I love how this was written Gabbs. I believe you did a great job on it and would love to see more. :)

5 0 Reply
Close
Error Success