Matches In A Waterfall Poem by Noah Smits

Matches In A Waterfall



If God comes like a thief in the night
Why do we see his fingerprints?
Toss me the phlogiston—I'll make it right
My world'll be a place without hints
Now laced with a pinch of unfaded delight
In each pixel and sprite: a town of atheist brights
(But I hate human rights, because humans are wrong
And they come up so short whereas law's arm is long)
And as kites fall on treetops from gusts and do stick
My mutts with new tricks drop their souls into freefall
No issuing recalls—the custard's too thick
Look down:
Dense with intricacies, each subject you pick
And hence my antipathy won't judge worth a lick
Though I analyze minds and I pick up perspectives
I'd still be hard-pressed to cold-shoulder my own
What strangers, behold! My actions stand for naught at all
To these captives below like matches in a waterfall

Monday, March 12, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: creation,god
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
About how we think we can do better at creating a world than God, but there are lots of factors we can't even begin to take into account, like the difficulty of a divine being relating to mortals, the paradoxical nature of wanting both pious and enlightened people, etc.
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