Tuesday, April 4, 2006

May Be Its Me. Comments

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It was just a picture of you.
Which show me the picture of love.
I’ve seen lots of beauties in live;
Even have met them too
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nongpoknganba khabanganba
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***** ********* 04 April 2006

Yes! my friend! It is often what the subject is looking at that creates that loving twinkle of life that it sounds like you have captured in your poem, of this womans image. English is not your first language, and the odd gramatical error is present in your work, but that matter not. The poem is complete in it's sentiment. 10 from Tai

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