Thursday, February 28, 2013

Me Against Them Comments

Rating: 5.0

Chances of winning this chess game are slim,
For i am but me and many are them.
Walking a straight line in a perfect circle,
Chancing this love which is now only a hassle.
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Vathalia Mae
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..... W@king Up..... 26 April 2013

Your words are just stunning...for I am but me and many are them. Very clever choice of words, and I love this poem :) goes on my poem list :))) Keep writing.

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Colin Bradley 23 March 2013

Vathalia very powerfull emotions they burst out from your words

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