Friday, November 26, 2010

Methodic Comments

Rating: 5.0

Well adjusted, and amended analytically strung.
Decisively disciplined, deliberately done.
Fixed in its framework, effective, efficient.
Purposely planed, it’s precise and proficient.
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Michael Hylton
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Michael Hylton 27 November 2010

Thank you R.H. Peat for taking the time to read my work. I don't know much about you or your work, but not all poetry is written about being alive or the human condition, and if they all were, then it wouldn't be every exciting to read. The point of this piece it just to try and show the techniques and figures a poet may use to make his work more interesting. Try looking up alliteration, apostrophe, assonance, metaphor, simile, hyperbole consonance, full rhyme, off rhyme, maybe this might help you understand the art of poetry a little better. Sorry you didn't like, but that's OK.

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R. H. Peat 26 November 2010

A really dull poem written about itself that really doesn't say much about being alive or the human condition at all. Boring to say the least. a poet friend// RH Peat

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