Thursday, May 8, 2008

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I wonder what they see
when they look at me

Cause i see all my little flaws
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Elenore Elizabeth 08 May 2008

beautiful truly it is. i can relate

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Stone Granite 08 May 2008

Dragon Bitch (I love the name by the way) - Your poem is excellent in its expression as to how you feel about yourself, the insecurities you have about what other people see and the last line in which you just give in to having to trust, yet you appear to still be unconvinced. At least that's what I got from it, which I think says a great deal. I enjoyed it very much and will read your other peoms. Stone

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