Monday, March 17, 2008

Mirror Dreams Comments

Rating: 3.0

You see you through me every day,
You see you through me every day,
Or at least you think you do.
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Stuart Doggett
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Shasta ! ! ! 17 March 2008

It could have been better if you didn't use the same lines twice in one part of the poem. But realling stong fellings i loved it keep wrighting

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