doneza bebe garlet

Mistaken Ecstasy

It only started with a simple 'hello'
Then things changed between us two
You said 'I love you', I said ' I do'
And it went on to be so true.

You cared for me and made me smile
Made me happy everyday and every while
You always proved that you were sincere
Yes, you were, it was very clear.

Everything went fine as months passed by
But then suddenly I began to cry
'Cause you're gone, I wanted to die
Yes, your love for me was only a lie.

I'm afraid I can't let you go
But it's the thing that I should do
It's much pain still holding on to you
The love we had just can't be true.

A big world's still ahead of me
And I must go on so I can see
The love that's real and meant for me
And you are just a mistaken ecstasy.

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 21, 2009

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Comments about Mistaken Ecstasy by doneza bebe garlet

  • Donessa Garlet (2/8/2010 6:30:00 AM)

    On a Cold, Lonely Night coming soon!

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  • Donessa Garlet (11/25/2009 1:39:00 AM)

    thnx for appreciating, yoonoos..you think it's too childish? ?

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  • Johnna Mae Barrios (10/30/2009 7:14:00 AM)

    nice piece don!

    imba!

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