Moon Poem by Raj Swami

Moon

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At night I face the moon.
The moon does not face me.
The moon seesmy every negativity,
But does not see its own stain.
The moon shines with great pride,
But does not see my sadness.
Living with thousand stars.
The moon delights at my loneliness.
Wow moon,
Wow.

Raj Swami

Moon
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Jean Larson 03 May 2018

So good to see this heartfelt poem. Moving.

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 May 2018

The moon shines with great pride, But does not see my sadness. some poets would say the moon is very lonely....... so are we poets. i understand u when u write about loneliness in this world where there are so many...... thank u dear poet. tony

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Raj Swami 03 May 2018

Thank you so much for reading my poem I like your thoughtful comment 🙏

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