Monday, March 27, 2006

Moroccan Retreat. Comments

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High on desert winds they sail,
sand blows in to fill their trail.
As memories of the battle fade
they hoist their flag in search of shade.
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Ashley Hawkes
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Phillip Sawatzky 10 April 2006

Ashley, The vastness eats us alive, where we hide we are swallowed by our fear, yet strange beauty holds us up. I love the camel's snoring hills. Have you ever ridden a camel? Its a trip! Actually quite good. Anyway, good work. Phillip

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Dan Tharp 27 March 2006

your words flow nicely throughout this poem... dan

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Ashley Hawkes

Ashley Hawkes

Hawera, Taranaki, New Zealand
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