Thursday, January 2, 2003

Mothers Comments

Rating: 4.3

A mother's love, a Mother's care,
A mother's sigh, a Mother's prayer
A Mother's work, and Mother's day,
Leaves little time for any play.
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Calvin M. Lake
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Molaire Jules 22 June 2007

''Thank you mom'' Great Job Calvin

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Elisa Lai 14 May 2006

the repetition goes very well in the first stanza but it doesn't work as well in the second. But the overall idea is good.

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Calvin M. Lake

Calvin M. Lake

Rockwell, North Carolina
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