Thursday, May 29, 2014
Mr Robin Comes For Tea Comments
Rating: ★3.5
When Mr Robin Redbreast comes to call on me
I like to open windows wide and ask him in for tea.
We both could share a fairy cake, or buns all topped with ice
Banoffee Pie or Tiramisu, yes both would be quite nice.
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3/12/2026 5:25:14 AM # 1.0.0
Love this. Gave it me equal highest mark so far since joining yesterday. Nothing helpful to say except that the first line is ambiguous about whether Mr Robin coming over the windowsill is something that actually happens recurrently, or is just a daydream. Love the control, the whimsy and the rhymes! Were you a syllable over with Tiramisu? And do shake and wash reinforce each other, or clash slightly? Struggling for anything to say. Loved it!