Monday, August 17, 2009

My Alien World Comments

Rating: 5.0

I live in an alien world, strange waters left over from a midnight rain,
dead and broken leaves, scattered as foliage to fill my hollowed heart
absent tears stream down my skin, like butterflys snared in a web of sadness,
knowing and praying for its aggonising fate
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Peter Lorenti
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Patrick A. Martin 17 August 2009

Man this is fantastic I hope you keep writing Peter you are the real deal 10

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