Thursday, October 9, 2014

My Big Brother Comments

Rating: 3.0

Day by day I think of you,
How can all of this be true?
I can't believe you're really gone,
I still can't accept it,
...
Read full text

Theyuz Banda
COMMENTS
Theyu Steve Banda 13 October 2014

thanks bro for your comment

1 0 Reply
Walani Ndhlovu 13 October 2014

Wow! This poem is so live and clear. The theme and the imagery are a perfect match. Keep it up!

1 0 Reply
Close
Error Success