My Brother Poem by Len Maonio

My Brother

Rating: 3.8


my brother's so sweet
in times of need he is there

my brother's so responsible
he taught me a lot of things

my brother's so funny
we even teared from laughing

my brother's so fierce
don't mess with him when his angry

my brother fell inlove
and he's very very happy

my brother made up his mind
and had a nice sweet family

my brother is away
i'm sad when i think of it

but my brother's heart is good
and i know he will never forget me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Jordan 10 February 2007

This is a beautiful poem and I think it really captures the essence of a brother

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Leahkay Sweet 05 February 2007

i love this peom beacuse it sounds just like my brother my brother is in iraq

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Lin Lin 28 October 2006

I really enjoy it. I don't know others but I love this poem.

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