Wednesday, October 15, 2008

My Brother And I. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Falling through memory's wide open window,
Hitherto kept tightly closed.
I'm flying away into chilhood experience
Where, brother and I were supposed
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Fay Slimm
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Susan Jarvis 28 October 2008

Fay, this is heartrendingly beautiful. Your brother was truly blessed to have a sister such as you. S :)

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Tom Balch 15 October 2008

Lovely piece to a lovely memory, during stressful times, not easy.10/10 Well done Fay.

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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