Wednesday, May 31, 2006

My Brown Eyed Girl Comments

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You lie there
Your eyes look at me from beneath
your pink blanket
Your sweet nose rests on
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Bianca n/a 14 June 2006

wow this is the best poem i have ever read! congratulations, you are a poet in the making, well actually not in the making, you are a poet and a superb one at that! i will be looking forward to reading more of your beautiful, emotionally touching, brilliant poems which have magnificent imagry, description, detail and style! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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