Saturday, March 1, 2008

My Desire Comments

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I want to breathe my words on your neck
Kiss the borders of your soul as it dreams
And dance with you on an ocean liner’s deck
Whisper thoughts to beat your ear drum beams
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Arthor Journer
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R R 02 March 2008

The beauty of the emotion and the soul displayed in the poem is so touching, and almost drives tears of movement. Great works!

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