Wednesday, April 15, 2009

My Disease Comments

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Hating the skin im in
Im filled with sin

Scared of the person underneath
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Toine Sheppard
pride
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Jake Erkens 29 April 2009

Lovely portrayal of human beings wanting to become someone else, rejecting their body which God has given to them. They live a lie because of their skin tone, weight, or even height. Good job. This poem has a good soft flow with good word choice. Nice poem indeed :) Regards Jake

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Sapphire Santiago 15 April 2009

i liked this poem, its really good

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Toine Sheppard

Toine Sheppard

magnoila, ar
Toine Sheppard
Toine Sheppard
magnoila, ar
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