My Drug Poem by Deanna Charles

My Drug



you're like a drug.
since the moment I met you
I didn't know what to do.
You're my adiction, they say you're not good for me.
But I definately don't agree.
Without you I'm nothing
I'm a shadow on the wall
every one walks on by.
\But yo noticed me and
made me whole. I feel
loved aand wanted, you're
all i need to survive
Without you I wouldn't be alive.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kyle Carson 14 June 2010

This is really good as well. Remember, always write from your heart..Express yourself. Don't be afraid to get aggressive with your writing, it pulls a lot of readers in when you have more aggression and deeper passion. <3?

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