Nicholas Hrynchuk

Rookie (10-28-1994)

My First Kiss - Poem by Nicholas Hrynchuk

This may not be the best I've written,
But in a good way I'm smitten,
You gave me my first kiss,
And everything felt perfect

What can I say? ,
You made my day,
Today was great,
And I felt my heart inflate

I didn't expect it,
My heart stopped in that second which split,
Your lips touched mine,
And everything felt fine,
If not better


Comments about My First Kiss by Nicholas Hrynchuk

  • (5/7/2010 10:01:00 PM)


    Is she the one you had written so much? ? :) (Report) Reply

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  • (5/7/2010 9:53:00 PM)


    Nice seemed it went a perfect day, if not better. love how some rhymes and can see the imagery. Love the poem (Report) Reply

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