Tuesday, December 30, 2008

My First Poem Comments

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I lost somewhere before u dream,
I lost somewhere before u dream.

D day u dream d day I lost,
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Tai Chi Italy 30 December 2008

This sounds like you swallowed a rasta pill mon! Not bad for a first I suppose I will believe you.....I liked the repetition of I lost somewhere before u dream, it give the poem some structure and D Day is somewhere close by before u dream, Happiness in 2009 to you, may all your dreams come true, well the good ones....smiling at you, TAi

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