Saturday, December 10, 2011

My Fragile Dream Comments

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The earth I am living with became empty
I don't know why i am the only one who survived
from that day, I dug a shallow grave beside my bed
just to feel that I am still not alone in the world
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Paolo Mikel Moro
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Shane Clawson 10 December 2011

Pretty good. line 3 stands out to me.

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